Dwelling: Bird Monolith

I am unsure about this piece so I thought I would post it to see what sort of feedback I could get. There are things I like and don't like about it.
^{Graphite pencil, ink, pastel, charcoal and acrylics on watercolor paper.
Approximately 10x15 inches}


_{Seth Fitts, 2011
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